Thank You, For Loving Me

confesssion, i've been watching you...

babe, i must admit that
i don't always say, what
needs to be said
i don't always do, what
needs to be done
truth is, i know that i
am not perfect, but i
would like to come close
to what a certain perfect
is with you
babe, you are my constant
reality...you know, kind
of like a wakeup lovecall
let me take you back to
a place, before we began
babe, my world was so
centered around darkness
i was content in my own
abyss...lifeless, loveless,
full of anger temptations
even my wrongs seem to
overpower my rights, babe
but then, God introduced
me to you, and those things
miraculously, soon faded
babe, what i'm trying to
say is...where darkness
once resided inside of me
changed to an enraptured
radiance that i could
not resist, unexpectedly,
within me because of you
i never chose to love you,
but it happened
and i know that you never
chose to love me, yet,
your feelings chose to
touch me...unconditionally
i am aware that i am most
fortunate to have you
thank you, for the care
that you have given to me
thank you, for the gift of
restoration within my soul
because of you my morals
have been reawakened
thank you, for being you,
and accepting me as i was
then, and as i am now
babe, most importantly,
thank you, for loving me

~~~myheartishumbleandthyloveservantdoesexist~~~

(creativeloveramblings)

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2010 All Rights Reserved.

Love Poetry Word Play Tidbit...

As I was saying a few days ago...

Another way to catch a readers attention is for a writer to use abstract language. Now, this simply means to use words that represent ideas, rather than things we can hear, see, smell, taste, or feel (our 5 senses, you know). Uhmmm...like for example, the word "love" is abstract; however, the word "caress" is concrete because we can recognize it with 1 or more of our 5 senses, basically.

Question: What does love do for you?

Love creations are like exquisite diamonds that will never tarnish...I am aware. -LoveRamblings

It Is I, Who Loves You

you are my moonlight
as i lovewaltz on the
very thought of you
i am under your
hypnotical lovetrance
captured in such sweet
bliss, i am content
yet, i long to express
to you what you mean
to me...honestly
i long to whisper words
of love to you
i long to feel you touch
me with your eyes
i long to feel you draw
me near
i long to drown in your
kisses, continuously
but, if i could just take
you in my arms and hold
you close to me would
complete my fantasy
or even if i could just
hear the music that your
heart plays for me...
but, until that day arrives,
just know that it is i, who
loves you
if i had never met you, i
would still be searching
for a love that is real
so, i want to desperately
thank you for that special
day that God bestowed
upon us to meet

~~~expressedloveinkdrops~~~

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2010 All Rights Reserved.

Love Poetry Word Play Tidbit, Here...

Not too long ago I was asked, what are other ways that one who writes poetry can capture a readers attention. I will go through one way today and will go through a few more ways in days to come.

NOTE: One way to catch a readers attention is for a writer to create an allusion. This is an indirect reference to a place, person, thing, or an idea which is familiar. These type of references provide a quick way for a writer to add detail, clarify important points, or set a certain tone for a poetry piece.

So it's only fair that you should know that...

i am my lover's

for it is my lover, who
has been redeemed
tonite, i sit here cryin'
tears of heavenly love
for my lover's
redemption song....
i am my lover's
last night, i wanted
to go climb mountains,
hills, valleys, and scream
out my lover's name
but instead, i laid next
to my lover, held him
close to me, quietly
i am my lover's
my love for him has
no boundaries of how
it can reach, because
it travels easily,
yet, creatively
even when my lover
is not here, i feel the
rapture of his love as
i feel him return to me
with just a simple
thought
for, it is my lover, who
has been redeemed
i am my lover's
i am my lover's only
as i drift on constant
lovethemes and islands
of rainbowschemes with
traces of devoured
chocolatemint dreams,
i am still....
last night, we spoke about
nothing and everything
in between, as we laid in
each others' arms
naturally, his energy
keeps me, consumes me,
captivates me
the vow has been made,
as i sit here cryin' tears
of heavenly joy for my
lover's redemption song....
tonite, i will forever be
my lover's
for, it is my lover, who
has been redeemed

~~~yeahletstalkaboutlovedrops~~~

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2003 All Rights Reserved.

So, I am back to the love poetry grind...

And when all else fails, I know that you are my stronghold, naturally what else can I do? Because, I am still...

Still Loving You

I love you with my whole
Heart, body, soul, and mind
You are my forever, you are
       My forever after
My love, you have become
           My lifeline
The times that I wanted
You to leave me alone, you
Didn't...you stayed strong
You are my strength when
Life's complexities are
             Raging
My refuge when life's
Reality becomes too much
             For me
You have resumed residence
              In me
Becoming my eternal flame
I need you to know that
You are my compass when
I need a sense of direction
Like the rain that falls
From the sky, I will let my
       Love fall on you
Once again, you will know
      Love as I know it,
You will feel love, as I feel it
You will hear love, as I hear it
I need no other love, because
     You are my love, still


-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2010 All Rights Reserved.

i am lookin' at lov

watchin' through dreamy
colored visions of
unconditonal yet,
romanticly speakin' lov
distance opens doors
that rides on the waves
of truth-life as it once
was, as it is today
it creates thoughts of
why we should never
really be apart
tellin' stories on how we
got there and here
and what may come to be
reality sets in like the
moon sets in the thicke of
the night...it is so strong
that it can almost be touched
and for some reason or
anotha', i am lookin' at lov
i'm lookin' at people holdin'
hands in the park as snow
flurries visit
i'm lookin' at how
contentment captures their
face as they feed on each
othas' wintery holidaylov....
i await to feel your presence
surround me just like that
some day
i watch to feel what every one
else can somehow see
i await to feel your positive
lovenergy drown me, i am
watchin' you, i am lookin'
at lov
i'm lookin' at children playin'
in the snow as i think about
you and i
i rememba' when lov was
so innocent and free
i can see it in the way that
you look at me
i hear it in your voice when
you say my name
and as you stand here before
me lov, i am lookin' at you

 ***hourglass***

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2006/2010 All Rights Reserved.

I Tried To Forget, But I Couldn't...

I remembered how captivating and amazing you truly are. So, I just wanted to let you know that I can't seem to...well, you know.


Love Revisited

I'm watching the stars in
The sky cry out as they
Create love trances of
              You
  My mind waves are
Intensified by the very
    Thought of you
For it is you, who has
Haunted me in my dreams,
            My love
I've missed you so much
That only my heart can
Reveal what my mind
Already knows...for it is
I, who loves you and I
Now feel that you still
      Love me, too
I hear it in your voice
And my heart overflows
With weakness at the
Very sound of your sweet
        Symphony
A lifetime has gone by
Yet still, I wish upon
The stars in the sky for
The hope of you and I
We sit and drift very
Briefly over old times
As we think about the
         Word "we"
Talking about our past
Lives with new, but old
Found friends only
Revealing what each
Other already knows...
We love each other even
Now, as if a lifetime ago
        Never came
I still love you, my love
Unconditionally, from
The well of my existence

~~~istilllovuaftaallthistyme~~~

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2010 All Rights Reserved.

Sometimes, I loose my way...but it's your love that redirects me.

And so, I must confess...

Loving You

i have loved once,
twice, three times
i have lost once,
twice, three times
it is only in my
third time that i
realized that i was
really, alone
alone, as in...
without real love
i was lifeless,
helpless and full
of anger inside
i have loved through
child-like eyes as i
have danced through
winter dreams of
hopeless happiness
as it passed me by
my eyes were shut
wide open with so
much despair....
but, when i met you
i fell head first into
your wisdom and
into your strength
yet, falling in love
with you was never
meant to be
yet, falling in love
with you was
mere destiny
if i have never ever
learned anything
else on this love
growth with you, i
know of one thing
that i have learned
is that to love you is
to truly know you
inside, out, and also,
in between
but, to even say all
of that just is not
enough because
there are no words
that can even come
close to expressing
what it truly means
to love you
i thank you for the
love that you have
given to me
consistently and so
willingly freely
you have shown me that
life can be a beautiful
thing with someone
that you love dearly
you have given me a
gift that has completed
me in the most special
way...a gift of loving
you, i want to just
thank you for every day
that you have allowed
me to enter your life
and just be

***theladyoflovepoetryspeaks***

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2002 All Rights Reserved.