So the love poetry word play journey continues...

Untitled Strong Love

to feel that the beauty of
loving, has no boundaries
is an incredible release
that i can not, begin to
express
i can not love as i have
loved before, i can only
love, as i have learned to
love now
my love for you is like a
streaming blood line
through penetrated veins
of glory
the evidence is clear as
the deep aqua sea...that
is enough evidence for me
i wish that my love for you
would somehow inherit all
of the richness in the sky,
including the moon, the
stars, the sun, the clouds
then, you could finally see
what type of effect you
have on me
shhh...be still my beating
heart, for it is you who has
concealed a creative
positivity loveforce evenly
within me
everytime you grace me
with your presence my
heart rapidly beats
my prayer is that these
beats stay constant
within me
but, must i always feel
this way?
surely, one can only hope
to love for eternity
yet, i have to wonder, will
i always love you as much
as i do right now?
surely, one can only live
to love exceedingly in
abundance
or is it that my love for
you is nothing more but
a mere fantasy?
no, that could not be true
in all honesty, i am nothing
but an artist who has created
loving you strong
in all honesty, i am nothing
without you

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2010 All Rights Reserved.

Hmmm...okay, well!!!

Let's talk about word play. Like what is the meaning of word play? Oooh, ohhh...I got this one. It is the creative spot that one reaches in using logical analogies and descriptive words to reach ones creative mind, poetically speaking. Word play can be inspired by cause and effect. Simple as that!

Mind Waves

Oceans and seas of tidal

Wave breezes of love
No longer distant shores
As I feel you next to me
Oh, yes...I, looking at you,
As I search for a greater
Depth of hues in the
Essence of you
How deep can I take you?
Is your heart anchored?
How can I move you to
Tranquility?
I ask you questions like
This you see, to see if I
Have the ability to bring
Out of you the sweet gift
Of serenity
Subliminal rapture is what
I feel when I am close to
you
I hear you whisper something
So soft, yet so deep, that
Only my body can hear....
I feel you trying to massage
My mind waves as I feast
On relaxation with you
Sensuous are we, as we
Knead each others' souls
But let me take this a
Little further to a place where
You can only understand, as
I take you to a level that
Only your mind will be able to
Be freed
You know, kind of like
Hypnotical mind waves of
Trances...let me take you there
We penetrate off of moonlight
Oceans as we drift
Rain thoughts of gentle breezes
With you brings me to climatic
Heights of the unknown
Radiant are we, ancient mind
Waves of oceans and seas
As we meditate on the idea
Of "we", close your eyes and
Repeat after me....
I love you...I hear you say,
"I love you"
I need you...I hear you say,
"I need you"
I want you...I hear you say,
"I want you"
Forever...and I hear you say,
"For eternity"
Limitless as our mind waves
Intertwine
My muse is your mental
Oh, and by the way, my work
Is done...ahhh, the sweet
Gift of serenity

~~~massaginthemindwitsensuosity~~~

-kaslis15-
Copyright © 2010 All Rights Reserved.

What makes good love poetry feel?

Word play. It is what brings love poetry alive, make it soar, make it hurt, make it cry, or even just make it be just that...love poetry. You don't always have to go through something to make love poetry feel; however, going through something makes it even better. But remember that creative souls...they come naturally, without any reservations.

What makes a good word play blossom?

One word...inspiration. It comes from within. It could be from something you have seen, heard, dreamed, or even gone or going through in your everyday lifestyle. I bet if you look around there is something that may capture your most inner third eye to spit out different creativity on paper. So, then, a master piece has blossomed. Inspiration is a beautiful thing...yes, indeed!